Hi Rilee I like your description of Autumn, it gives me a picture in my head. I like the shape that you choose and the colors you choose. Was it fun to write?
Hi Rilee, Your description is really, really, really, really, really, really good!!!! It gave me a picture in my head. And it felt like there were crunchy leaves under my toes.
Hi Rilee
ReplyDeleteI like your description of Autumn, it gives me a picture in my head. I like the shape that you choose and the colors you choose. Was it fun to write?
Yeah a little bit fun.
DeleteHi Rilee, Your description is really, really, really, really, really, really good!!!!
ReplyDeleteIt gave me a picture in my head. And it felt like there were crunchy
leaves under my toes.